Wednesday, April 03, 2013

Today's Mystery Author Guest: Bonnie Biafore

As promised yesterday, fellow Colorado mystery author Bonnie Biafore is visiting my blog today. To read her bio and see her photo, please page down to yesterday's post. Also, Bonnie is running a contest for a free autographed copy of her latest release co-written with James Ewing, Fresh Squeezed, the cover art for which appears above. Bonnie will select the winner tomorrow evening from among those who leave a comment today or tomorrow.

In Fresh Squeezed, Anthony “Juice” Verrone, former Mafia enforcer and guest of the Witness Security Program, is trying to hide from the Family he sent up the river. When a giant hot dog, a fiberglass bass, and a plummeting corpse put the squeeze on Juice, he thinks he’s been found out. Juice teams up with Rudy Touchous, a forensic accountant, and Police Chief Dickie Gordon, to track down the killer. Instead, they run head-on into a public utility in desperate financial straits, a local troop of NASCAR-addled, bass-fishing rednecks with odd literary aspirations, and a vegetarian commune, which, in its dedication to the well-being of plants, is tossing more than lettuce into its salad bar. And what is that secret ingredient in their all-vegetarian hotdogs? The Utility’s plans leak, so they bring in a strange parade of hired guns to make sure the people who know too much can’t say anything. When these players mix it up at the Asparagus Festival a conflagration ignites that changes everything.

Sounds like a juicy read! Below are Bonnie's answers to my interview questions. Please leave a comment, and if you have a question of your own for Bonnie, ask it!

1. Who or what inspired you to start writing and when did you start?
Back in 2001, my husband and I were working as contractors for a Washington State power utility that managed power generation along the mid-Columbia River. Listening to the usual water cooler chat eventually spawned (salmon on the Columbia River, get it?) the idea of having two incompetent groups both trying to blow up the same dam. While we were living in Washington State, we would talk on the phone with a very funny friend of ours, James Ewing, and riff on ideas about stupid criminals. I wisely kept notes. Fast forward to late 2008. I called James and suggested that we write the book as a tribute to my husband who passed away in 2006. We got to work. Three and a half years later the book was published.

2. What tools and process do you use to “get to know” your characters before and while you’re writing the books?
The characters didn’t give us a choice. They knew what they were like and told us what we needed to know. I remember the morning that Rudy Touchous, the sidekick forensic accountant, introduced himself to me. I was visiting James for two weeks to work on the novel. I woke up with a crystal clear image of Rudy and a scene in my head. It took me a couple of hours to write the chapter, and that was that. Later, as we revised the manuscript, Rudy grew and changed; he became more confident, but never lost the puppy-like enthusiasm I first saw. Closer to the end of the revision process, we would make changes because we had the characters doing things they wouldn’t do. Even with two authors, the characters are who they are. We’re just the medium for them to come into our world.

3. How do you construct your plots? Do you outline or do you write “by the seat of your pants”?
James and I are both Capricorn engineers, so we are VERY organized. We spent a week brainstorming the story line. We created a spreadsheet with scenes in chronological order. Scenes moved around during revisions, but that spreadsheet acted as our guide as we wrote our first, second, and third drafts.

4. In the age-old question of character versus plot, which one do you think is most important in a murder mystery and which one do you emphasize in your writing? Why?
Plot is a bit more important than character, but a good mystery needs both. Fresh Squeezed isn’t a classic murder mystery; it’s a wacky crime comedy. The novel is driven more by the characters and humor with the criminal hijinks underneath to hold everything together.

A crime comedy also has a balance and transitions between humor and tension. Both require a good sense of timing, so they are more similar than you might think at first. Many people turn to humor to help them through difficult times, so a tense scene can include humor. On the other hand, some tense scenes need to stand on their own and some funny scenes are too crazy to share the stage with tension. It’s like yin and yang.

5. What is the biggest challenge you’ve faced as a writer and what inspires you and keeps you motivated?
The biggest challenge is paying the bills. I have to do that first, so I can write fiction.

Inspiration for crime comedy isn’t an issue. The world is a funny place. I remember when I found out that Costco sells coffins. I find that funny and have all sorts of ideas about how to work that into a story someday. I grew up with cantankerous elderly relatives, who inspired several characters and scenes in Fresh Squeezed. The biggest challenge writing stories about stupid criminals is beating real people to it.

6. What is a typical workday for you and how many hours a day (or week) do you devote to writing?
When I was writing the first draft of the novel, I would write for about two hours and produce 1500 to 2500 words. Another hour of editing and a first draft of the scene would be finished. That’s the fun and easy part.

From start to finish, completing a book requires all sorts of work that consumes a lot more time and can last for months. James and I spent a few hours each morning (for months) talking on Skype, while we revised the manuscript.

Outside of fiction, my career is primarily writing about business, finance, and technology. The books, training courses, and articles I author share many of the same work components as writing fiction. My typical work week including both fiction and non-fiction is 6 or 7 days a week, anywhere from 6 to 12 hours a day.

7. What advice do you have to offer to an aspiring author?
If you’re going to juggle earning a living and writing fiction, start by figuring out when you’re most productive and most creative. Try to arrange your schedule so you work on fiction at that time, even if it’s only for an hour at a time.

Learn the discipline to continue working even if you feel like quitting. At the same time, learn to recognize when you need to take a break. If you’re spinning your wheels, sitting in the chair longer doesn’t help. Get out for a walk. Usually, the answer comes to me while I’m taking that break.

If you feel overwhelmed, carve out a small task that you know you can do and then do it. The energy boost you get from finishing that one small thing helps you start the next small thing. Before you know it, you’ll have a boatload of stuff done. Think about a 90,000 word novel. All you have to do is write 500 words a day for 180 days and that first draft will be done.

8. Now here’s a zinger. Tell us something about yourself that you have not revealed in another interview yet. Something as simple as your favorite TV show or food will do.
My favorite guilty food pleasure is *crunchy* Cheetos (puffy Cheetos are just ridiculous). I don’t eat them very often. When I do, I don’t think about the fact that I’m addicted to a bright orange snack that has absolutely no nutritional value and is probably made from petroleum, cow hooves, and salt. (I’m too busy crunching.)

9. What are you working on now and what are your future writing plans?
I have ideas heading in several directions. I have some ideas for stories based on some of the characters in Fresh Squeezed. A newspaper article I read recently gave me an idea for a suspense story. And some other possibilities further off the trampled path.

10. Is there anything else you would like to tell my blog readers? 
Please visit my website. I don’t have a blog yet (unless you want to read the one I write about project management), but my co-author, James Ewing, writes a very entertaining one.

I live in Conifer, Colorado. James lives on Bainbridge Island near Seattle. We are both happy to talk to book clubs, if you’re nearby. We also love to hear about stupid criminal stories you’ve heard about or made up.

 Thanks, Bonnie! Now, who has a comment or question for Bonnie Biafore? Good luck in the contest!   


Anonymous said...

I would love a chance to win this book. I have never read anything by Bonnie. i like trying new authors. She has a great name, my mom's name is Bonnie. If I win contact me Tammie. At

cmgren said...

Great interview! This sounds like such a fun read - would love to win a copy. Hope you are busy writing a sequel. Thanks for having this contest.

Kathy McIntosh said...

I met Bonnie when we shared a panel at Left Coast Crime. Believe me, she is a funny, talented woman! I already have the book and can't wait to read it. Who could resist a cigar-smoking fish?
Now to prove I'm not a robot. A challenge.

Unknown said...

Thanks for reading the interview and good luck in the contest.

Kathy McIntosh is pretty funny too and I have her book on my pile to read. (That's the problem with Left Coast Crime -- I came back with about two year's worth of books to read.)


Sandie said...

Bonnie's book sounds like a must will be going on my to read will be high up on the list if I won it...:)

Dean K Miller said...

I'm a crunchy Cheetos fan too! But they certainly don't mix with keyboards at all!

I'd love to read this book, especially as a fishing fanatic (even if the bass is plastic),

Clamo88 said...

Having never been to Colorado, this book sounds like a great way to visit virtually. I look forward to reading and discovering your characters and seeing if I can figure out "who dunnit" before you reveal it.

Bonnie said...


Although I do have to turn my keyboard upside down and shake it from time to time for the fun of seeing what falls out, I agree with you. I would never eat crunchy Cheetos near a keyboard. Plus, there is the telltale orange residue on the keys.

Bonnie said...

Claire, The book isn't set in Colorado. It takes place in a fictional town along the Columbia River in Washington State. Although the town is fictional, the descriptions of the surrounding area are true to life.

But you should visit Colorado. It's a beautiful place.

Shirley said...

Just love mysteries with stupid criminals. Bonnie Biafore is a new writer to me but her name goes on my "wanted" list.

Beth Groundwater said...

Hi everyone,
Bonnie is at a conference today in a hotel without her computer. She will pick the name of a winner in her contest when she gets hope tonight and post it then. Please check back late tonight or tomorrow to see if you won!

Bonnie Biafore said...

Hi Folks,

Thanks so much for reading the interview and posting a comment.

Since I made you wait to find out who won, I've decided to name two winners: Dean and Shirley.

Please send me an email with your mailing address to bonnie.biafore at (you know how string those together right?) and put "Beth's blog interview" in the subject to help me recognize the email.